This was my first poem after a gap in which i had no time to write. I had had the idea for a while but no words then they came to me all of a sudden, i hope you enjoy. Here are the previous comments:

Deviant: ~airetosE (#162021479)
Date: Aug 17, 2005, 4:11:20 AM
Nice one... the imagery is intensely vivid, and i can almost hear the waves thrash the distance rocks while the sun hangs above the horizon, bleaching half of the sky in a pale pastel blue/orange...
Great poem...
-~Hakuin (#162023408)
Date: Aug 17, 2005, 4:22:17 AM
Thanks man, you honour my humble page.
~-airetosE (#162025112)
Date: Aug 17, 2005, 4:32:13 AM
Bahaha NO I DO NOT and you are WAY too humble. One thing about poets on dA that is a bit cruddy, is that they don't get the credit/recognition they deserve. People will rarely click on a text preview knowing that it's a written piece (which is why i used to submit all my writings with home-made preview pics, but ever since about a week or so ago, they made ALL written submissions display a text-only thumbnail so there's no more luring peeps with accompanying art )
Okay i lost track of where i was going. OH YEAH. Keep writing, sir. With stuff of this calibre, you're bound to be famous sooner or later
~-Hakuin (#162064879)
Date: Aug 17, 2005, 7:53:06 AM
Lol thanks a lot, but yeah it's true, its a bit demoralising when you see someone who's been a member for a shorter length of time than you and they have 3000+ page views. You dont really need pictures to lure people into your writings, they're a picture in themselves.
-~airetosE (#162066550)
Date: Aug 17, 2005, 8:00:31 AM
If only everyone saw it that same way ... it'd make things a lot less discouraging.
-~invisible-ignored (#163247131)
Date: Aug 21, 2005, 1:01:43 AM
Mate, that is the bomb.
:- ~Hakuin (#163409730)
Date: Aug 21, 2005, 2:11:17 PM
Thank you, and thanks for the fave xxxxx
-The-Philosophy (#163270466)
Date: Aug 21, 2005, 3:35:23 AM
So vivid in my mind is that scene.
Well well written.
The loneliness to the breaking into freedom in mind to returning.
"My feet a little deeper in the sand."
dude what a way to end
-~Hakuin (#163409073)
Date: Aug 21, 2005, 2:08:29 PM
Thank you so so much, I'm glad you knew it was breaking into freedom in the mind (not that i would doubt you to understand). I love that ending, I was so pleased with this poem once i'd finished it, as i said, i had the idea of this poem for so long but i had no words, i just knew that's how i wanted it to end. Again, thanks.
-~The-Philosophy (#163572309)
Date: Aug 22, 2005, 2:43:51 AM
Be proud of this piece buddy
~-Hakuin (#163580522)
Date: Aug 22, 2005, 3:31:50 AM
I shall be, I made it into my 'Featured Deviation', get me going all technical
~-The-Philosophy (#163581719)
Date: Aug 22, 2005, 3:38:45 AM
wOOt!